Draft 3 of Descriptive Essay

2007-03-01T19:02:00.000-08:00

My English Teacher

On my first day entering high school, I saw guidance teacher an English teacher.
At the first sight, she looked fashionable, but when she walked close to me. I was
shocked because she wore a red dress, a green hoop skirt, and a twinkling earring
which prickled to my eyes. And her waist band was adorned with some pink glasses
and little yellow feathers her bottom was the strangest for it was distorted, and she
walked herky-jerky. I couldn’t believe that I could see a gimpy peacock not in a zoo
but by my side.

Then she told us in English that she would improve our English ability
austerely and minutely. I couldn’t hear her voice clearly at first because her voice
sounded like something sharp scraping the blackboard. I asked her to say it again
because I couldn’t understand what she was talking about. Then she said it again
with a louder voice. I heard thousands of crows clamoring at the same time, and I felt
my ear drums were cracking because of her sharp voice.
ear drums were cracked because of her voice.

Whenever she paced around the class, she would held a chalk in her hand with a
terrible face. If a student was dozing in the class, she would fling the chalk fleetingly
to hit the student’s head. When the student woke up with a panic, she put a
book on student’s table and said loudly “Let’s shark hands to keep you awake.”
Afterwards she would grab the student’s hand with strong shocking, and
at the moment, I just saw a hungry monkey attacking someone who has no food for
her.

After the fist English exam most students got a bad grade; Miss C stood on the
table with a dreadful look. She said she should teach us by another way, and perhaps
our grade will better. And then she took the microphone and sang an English song
loudly, and danced with joy. Since then she would sing a popular English song and
made us imitate her before we looked at the textbook. I had no choice but say that
the approach was very useful for us to practice English, so our English grade
improved with singing together activities.

To sum up, Miss C is really a weird and complex person; she can be a peacock,
monkey, crow, singer and helpful English teacher at the same time.

Human Characteristics in Animals

Animals have a lot of same characteristics as human, and animals’ characteristic
is innate rather than human is acquired. In other word, humans’ characteristics may
imitate animals. For example, dog, loyalty, the virtue could usually be found in
feudalism. The Knights pledge loyalty to their lords as the dog to their owner.
Furthermore in Japan the Bushido can kill when their lords ask them to .These days,
we could often find the relationship between husband and wife. They want each other
could loyal for their marriage. They tell each other that “I want you loyalty to me
forever like the dog to us “.

My grandfather has a cat which is amazing animal. The cat can find a food by
itself so that we don’t have to feed it. Besides, it can pee in a toilet and it can also
flush the toilet. When it feels sleep, it will jump to my grandfather’s bed and finds a
comfortable place to sleep. I believe that the cat is a guest of my grandfather. It may
think that my grandfather’s house is a hotel but it doesn’t need to pay any money.

In United States, the children is always separated from their family when they
grow up. Instead of living with their parents, they want to have their own life. A bird,
swallow, it has the same characteristic since it leaves home without any atone for its
parents. When the old swallow becomes disability and flies with
difficulty, the old swallow’s strong child will separate from them as like they does to
their parents.

We could find that animals is similar to human beings in psyche and physiology.
We shouldn’t consider that animals is just our pet because we could observe them
then we can learn a some similar behaviors. And therefore human will be acquainted
with human deeper. In conclusion, Animals has the same characteristics as human, and human can know self deeper form animals.

The Differences Between Speaking and Writing

Speaking and writing are the basic language skills of humans. They both are used
to communicate, but serve different functions. There are several differences between
them. First of all, spoken language develops earlier than written language.
For example, several thousand years ago, the ancestors of human had
already used simple voice to communicate with one another, but they hadn’t have
their own written language because they used voice to express their ideas , like anger,
happiness or sadness. Oppositely, written language was created later.

Spoken language is used to express ideas so that people know one another’s ideas,
but it will also disappear in air quickly because of its physical format.
For example, when we listen to a long speech, if we do not take a note we will often
forget what we have ever heard. On the other hand, written language is used to
express ideas on a piece of paper so it can be preserved for a long time. For example,
human has history because human’s ancestors recorded their thoughts in written
texts, so human can know what happened a thousand years ago. Thus written
language may be preserved longer than spoken language.

In addition, people can learn to speak well more easily than write well. For
example, illiterate people can speak good English or another language even though
they don’t know any word of its written language. However, it’s more difficult to
learn to write correctly. For example, Children learn to speak before they enter school.
Even if they are not taught systematically, they can become fully competent speakers,
but can not be competent writers without being trained. Writing system is very
complex and organized so every competent writer must all be
taught to write.

Spoken language and written language have their own features and they have
individual advantages and disadvantages respectively. We can’t make the conclusion
which one is better because they both are important and useful to our communication.

Definition of Happiness

Online:

Thesis: happiness is having much money.

I: according toWikiped Happiness is an emotional or affective state that is characterized by feelings of enjoyment and satisfaction, but for me happiness is having much money.

II.examples:
A. my rich friend, Jack
B. my colleague, John

III.conclusion: having much money is the essential of happiness.

Either the poor or the rich want to have much money. In order to have more money,
people encourage themselves to work or study harder. For example, I have twofriends;
they come from absolutely different family. One is very rich, and the other is poor.
However, they get the same ideas about money can bring happiness. Also, they want
to have more money. So I think having much money is the essential of happiness.

My friend, Jack, he was the eldest son of his wealthy family. Jack’s parents had a high
salary job, and they seemed content. Therefore he could ask for what he want to his parents,
and they almost respond him. On the weekend, his father took him to
drive in the Porsche car in the afternoon. Afterward, they went to a high class restaurant to
have an expensive dinner. He told me what the food he hated most was ormer, because ormer
tasted like a weak gum. After dinner, they went shopping indepartment store. They could spend a large sum of money in one day. Furthermore, in
summer vacation they traveled Asia from end to end, and lived in a high-class villa
which on the sea front. Whenever he talked about his family, he was always smiling
because his family had a huge of money.

John, he is the most deplorable guy I have known. His father was dead since he was
9 years old, and his mother had to feed him by herself. Besides, John had 2sisters and two
brothers, and his mother’s salary couldn’t support the family. Therefore, the family
lived on relied, and John had to work for his family in 12 years old. John even
couldn’t spent the money which he made, because all of the money is to support the large
family. John always wore a wearing jeans and a washed out shirt. Therefore, he
was so jealous of those rich men. However, he had no power to change his life. Once he
told me that he thought having much money can make his family and himself happy.

In my friends’ example, having much money is the same meaning to own a happy life.
The rich often live with happiness; oppositely, the poor make the family miserable. So I think
having much money is the essential of happiness, and I think the objective reality is the
same. In more precise terms, I think that “no money,no happy; have money, have fun.”

Beautiful Life

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